9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
As is known to all, the traffic is very poor and heavy. The bus or the train is really crowded
Every time I go home from my company or leave home for my company, I have to accept such a hard experience though I have been used to it.
On a cold December morning in 2009, I boarded a bus with my four bags which were large. Luckily, there were two empty seats left. About one hour later, a well-dressed young guy got on and took the seat next to mine. I was cautious. I would often come across guys who were eager to talk to a girl travelling on her own. So I was not surprised when he spoke up.
“Where are you going?” he asked.
“Rampur Bushehr,” I replied briefly and put on my earphones to enjoy some music or to avoid talking with him. He did not bother me after that as if he had known my idea.
It started to rain and cold water was dropping through the roof right on to my lap. Seeing that, the guy emptied a plastic shopping bag full of clothes, which he pushed into his travel bag. He then handed me the plastic bag. I accepted it with a sheepish(困窘的) “thanks” before spreading it on my lap.
Minutes later, the bus broke down! The conductor announced we would have to move to another bus that would reach us shortly, and that there would be no more buses after that, since there had been heavy snowfalls. All the passengers of the bus got off and stood on the side of the road, ready to rush into the next bus. The conductor unwillingly helped me get off the bus with my luggage and I too waited with other passengers.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为100左右；
2.应使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写开头语已为你写好：
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already.
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As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
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【答案】When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already. It seemed there wasn’t enough space for me, let alone my four bags. Seeing that, that young guy came to me, “Don’t worry, I’ll help you get on it.” As a stranger, he behaved too enthusiastic, which made me felt awkward, but I was curious about how he could make it. When the door opened, the guy rushed into the bus. Through the window, I saw he talked to the driver and pointed at me. After a while, the driver asked the crowd to make a path. I didn’t realize it was for me until everyone looked at me. Someone even helped to carry my luggage. It was really crowded on the bus, but at least I got on it.
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy. He did me such a favor and I should say thanks to him, but not sheepish this time. However, reminded by another passenger, I found that he was on the side of the road, waving goodbye to me. I came to the window and shouted to him, “What’s your name?” The guy smiled but didn’t reply. The bus bumped its way slowly down the road, while his figure gradually faded away and my heart couldn’t be calm for a long time. We do have to accept hard experiences sometimes, but still can expect kindness and warmth.
【分析】
本文以乘公交车为场景展开，时间回溯到2009年十二月份的一个早上，作者带着四大包行李搭上公交车，遇到一个陌生男子的搭讪和帮助，而此时车子突然抛锚了，售票员让乘客们下车等下一趟。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当公交车终于到了时，车上已经有很多乘客了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在年轻男子的帮助下设法坐上了车。
②由第二段首句内容“公交车向着我的家乡进发时，我环顾四周寻找那个人。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到了年轻男子，向他表示感谢，两人一路畅谈直到目的地；当然开放式结局也可设计为作者发现年轻男子并没有上车，在作者想要知道他的名字时，男子只是微笑着看着公交车缓缓驶离。
2.续写线索：公交车拥挤——男子帮忙求助司机——成功上车——寻找男子——男子未上车——心怀感激
3.词汇激活：
行为类
①求助：seek help/ask for help/turn to
②出发：set off/set out/leave for
③寻找：look for/search for/seek
情绪类：
①感激：appreciation/ gratitude/be grateful
②尴尬：awkward/embarrassed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. As a stranger, he behaved too enthusiastic, which made me felt awkward, but I was curious about how he could make it.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. The guy smiled but didn’t reply. The bus bumped its way slowly down the road, while his figure gradually faded away and my heart couldn’t be calm for a long time.（while引导的时间状语从句）
As is known to all, the traffic is very poor and heavy. The bus or the train is really crowded
Every time I go home from my company or leave home for my company, I have to accept such a hard experience though I have been used to it.
On a cold December morning in 2009, I boarded a bus with my four bags which were large. Luckily, there were two empty seats left. About one hour later, a well-dressed young guy got on and took the seat next to mine. I was cautious. I would often come across guys who were eager to talk to a girl travelling on her own. So I was not surprised when he spoke up.
“Where are you going?” he asked.
“Rampur Bushehr,” I replied briefly and put on my earphones to enjoy some music or to avoid talking with him. He did not bother me after that as if he had known my idea.
It started to rain and cold water was dropping through the roof right on to my lap. Seeing that, the guy emptied a plastic shopping bag full of clothes, which he pushed into his travel bag. He then handed me the plastic bag. I accepted it with a sheepish(困窘的) “thanks” before spreading it on my lap.
Minutes later, the bus broke down! The conductor announced we would have to move to another bus that would reach us shortly, and that there would be no more buses after that, since there had been heavy snowfalls. All the passengers of the bus got off and stood on the side of the road, ready to rush into the next bus. The conductor unwillingly helped me get off the bus with my luggage and I too waited with other passengers.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为100左右；
2.应使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写开头语已为你写好：
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already. It seemed there wasn’t enough space for me, let alone my four bags. Seeing that, that young guy came to me, “Don’t worry, I’ll help you get on it.” As a stranger, he behaved too enthusiastic, which made me felt awkward, but I was curious about how he could make it. When the door opened, the guy rushed into the bus. Through the window, I saw he talked to the driver and pointed at me. After a while, the driver asked the crowd to make a path. I didn’t realize it was for me until everyone looked at me. Someone even helped to carry my luggage. It was really crowded on the bus, but at least I got on it.
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy. He did me such a favor and I should say thanks to him, but not sheepish this time. However, reminded by another passenger, I found that he was on the side of the road, waving goodbye to me. I came to the window and shouted to him, “What’s your name?” The guy smiled but didn’t reply. The bus bumped its way slowly down the road, while his figure gradually faded away and my heart couldn’t be calm for a long time. We do have to accept hard experiences sometimes, but still can expect kindness and warmth.
【分析】
本文以乘公交车为场景展开，时间回溯到2009年十二月份的一个早上，作者带着四大包行李搭上公交车，遇到一个陌生男子的搭讪和帮助，而此时车子突然抛锚了，售票员让乘客们下车等下一趟。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当公交车终于到了时，车上已经有很多乘客了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在年轻男子的帮助下设法坐上了车。
②由第二段首句内容“公交车向着我的家乡进发时，我环顾四周寻找那个人。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到了年轻男子，向他表示感谢，两人一路畅谈直到目的地；当然开放式结局也可设计为作者发现年轻男子并没有上车，在作者想要知道他的名字时，男子只是微笑着看着公交车缓缓驶离。
2.续写线索：公交车拥挤——男子帮忙求助司机——成功上车——寻找男子——男子未上车——心怀感激
3.词汇激活：
行为类
①求助：seek help/ask for help/turn to
②出发：set off/set out/leave for
③寻找：look for/search for/seek
情绪类：
①感激：appreciation/ gratitude/be grateful
②尴尬：awkward/embarrassed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. As a stranger, he behaved too enthusiastic, which made me felt awkward, but I was curious about how he could make it.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. The guy smiled but didn’t reply. The bus bumped its way slowly down the road, while his figure gradually faded away and my heart couldn’t be calm for a long time.（while引导的时间状语从句）
