9．书面表达
假如你是李华，是向阳中学九年级（1）班的一名学生，你的初中生活即将结束， 请你以“My suggestions”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学习、生活、校园活 动、同学关系这几个方面给七年级的新生提几点建议，并提出你的希望和祝愿。 写作要求：1、内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
2、语篇完整，语句通顺。语法正确，书写规范。
3、文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分。
4、开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
My Suggestions
My name is Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourfulschool life in middle school.
First, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class.Second, It’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy?Third, Why not take part in school activities and make more friends?Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.
I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life.
【解析】
1. 从作文的话题来看，今年的作文题延续了往年常考的校园类型作文， 为中学生所熟悉，贴近学生生活的实际，让考生有话可写。
2. 从命题的形式上，今年仍然是常见的“提纲式”作文，给出要点提示，给考生留下足够的自主发挥空间， 同时也有效防止考生“直译”要点，对写作能力的要求在不断提高。
3. 从写作类型上来看，本次作文属于表达建议类型的作文。在写作的得分点要求上，只要同学们能按老师平时要求的注意事项去把握好作文的四大得分点：（1）书写工整；（2）要点齐全，且有逻辑；（3）语法正确；（4）句式多样。特别是在句式多样性方面，我们切忌使用重复的句型，要有意识地使用以往学过的表建议类型的句子，来达到句式多样性的要求。
亮点说明：
本文使用了逻辑连接词First/Second/Third，使文章层次清晰。
【高分句型一】
Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourful school life in middle school. 在这里，我想和大家分享一些关于如何在中学里过一个有意义和丰富多彩的学校生活的建议。how to live a meaningful and colourful school life，做介词on的宾语。
【高分句型二】
Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble. 最后但同样重要的是，我们最好与我们的同学和老师相处好，因为他们会帮助我们当我们遇到麻烦。because they will help us when we are in trouble.是由because 引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型三】
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life. 如果我们听从劝告，我们一定会在中学生活中取得很大进步。If we follow the advice是由if引导的条件句。
假如你是李华，是向阳中学九年级（1）班的一名学生，你的初中生活即将结束， 请你以“My suggestions”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学习、生活、校园活 动、同学关系这几个方面给七年级的新生提几点建议，并提出你的希望和祝愿。 写作要求：1、内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
2、语篇完整，语句通顺。语法正确，书写规范。
3、文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分。
4、开头已给出，不计入总词数。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Suggestions
My name is Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourfulschool life in middle school.
First, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class.Second, It’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy?Third, Why not take part in school activities and make more friends?Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.
I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life.
【解析】
1. 从作文的话题来看，今年的作文题延续了往年常考的校园类型作文， 为中学生所熟悉，贴近学生生活的实际，让考生有话可写。
2. 从命题的形式上，今年仍然是常见的“提纲式”作文，给出要点提示，给考生留下足够的自主发挥空间， 同时也有效防止考生“直译”要点，对写作能力的要求在不断提高。
3. 从写作类型上来看，本次作文属于表达建议类型的作文。在写作的得分点要求上，只要同学们能按老师平时要求的注意事项去把握好作文的四大得分点：（1）书写工整；（2）要点齐全，且有逻辑；（3）语法正确；（4）句式多样。特别是在句式多样性方面，我们切忌使用重复的句型，要有意识地使用以往学过的表建议类型的句子，来达到句式多样性的要求。
亮点说明：
本文使用了逻辑连接词First/Second/Third，使文章层次清晰。
【高分句型一】
Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourful school life in middle school. 在这里，我想和大家分享一些关于如何在中学里过一个有意义和丰富多彩的学校生活的建议。how to live a meaningful and colourful school life，做介词on的宾语。
【高分句型二】
Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble. 最后但同样重要的是，我们最好与我们的同学和老师相处好，因为他们会帮助我们当我们遇到麻烦。because they will help us when we are in trouble.是由because 引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型三】
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life. 如果我们听从劝告，我们一定会在中学生活中取得很大进步。If we follow the advice是由if引导的条件句。
