初中生活即将结束,请你想一下,谁是你最喜欢的老师?他、她长什么样子?你 为什么喜欢他、她?以 My favorite Teacher 为题,用英语写一篇短文

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初中生活即将结束,请你想一下,谁是你最喜欢的老师?他、她长什么样子?你 为什么喜欢他、她?以 My favorite Teacher 为题,用英语写一篇短文,请根 据要点进行描述,可以结合具体事例,也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。
要点:
1. What does he/ she look like?
2. Why do you like him/her?
3. ……
注意:
1.词数 80~100;
2.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容,要求行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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写作思路
这是一篇给材料作文,本文所给要点是几个问题,故动笔前先要阅读要点,找出问题的答案。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
参考范文
My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. She is tall and has long straight hair.
And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative, because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.

【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对……严格;be ready to do sth准备做某事;in trouble处于困难中;try one's best do to sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
 
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